This is my edit for 'Free'; however I plan on adding additional opening credits, a mixture of 'found credits' and text credits. I would also like to add some audio to the beginning to the clip, as I am not a fan of the complete silence. Furthermore, I struggled with various audio issues with the loud wind in some scenes. I decided to re-shoot a portion of my opening sequence because the initial cut was not complete and had multiple problems with audio. I felt as if this shoot was more successful, despite losing an actor.
You need to have studio/ distributor idents before the start of your piece (see Eughan and Charlotte's). I can see what you mean about the audio.
ReplyDeleteWhy does he put the record on when he's late?
You really do need to sort out the credits.
The "dealing" sequence is a lot more effective, although I would like to see a few more shots in the lead up to the gunshot.